The Legend of Saif-ul-Malook Part IV

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The storytellers of Saif-ul-Malook

Lake Saif-ul-Malook, situated at a height 10, 600 feet at the northern tip of the Kaghan Valley in Pakistan’s Himalayas, is  one of the  most beautiful places on earth. I have been there twice, the first time as a 12-year old and then in 2009, when I determined to capture some of its magic on camera and on paper, in the words of two local storytellers who relate the legend of the Lake to visitors.

It is the story of a prince and a fairy, Saif-ul-Malook and Badr-ul-Jamal  a story of love, adventure, faith, magic, suffering and betrayal – a story of the multitude of human passions.

Many different versions exist, but below is a reproduction of what the storytellers told us, with some writer’s liberties. I hope you enjoy it!

Read Part IPart II and Part III of the story 


When Deo Safed reached the Lake, there was no one in sight. “Badr, Badr!” he roared. “Badr, Badr, Badr…” the mountains mocked his terrible cries.

Malika Parbat, the loftiest peak in the Kaghan Valley, towered silently above, her white slopes gleaming in the cold moonlight. “She’s gone, Deo Safed, she’s gone”, the Queen of the Mountains seemed to say to him. “Tonight you receive your just deserts.”

Malika Parbat, Queen of the Mountains, Kaghan Valley
Malika Parbat, Queen of the Mountains, Kaghan Valley

Deo Safed became desperate. Could it be? Was Badr Jamal truly lost? Did the Lake consume her, then, sucking her into its bottomless belly like a jealous monster,  like he himself had done so many years ago?

There was only one way to find out.

Deo Safed struck one gigantic foot on the southwestern shore of the Lake. There was a dull moan, somewhere deep in the bowels of the earth, and, like a beast awakening, the ground heaved, shuddered, and ripped open where the ogre had stamped his foot.

The serene waters of the Lake began to churn and froth, tumbling out from the crevice in torrents of emerald and blue.  Deo Safed had released the Spirit of the Lake.

As the waves went crashing down to the Valley below, Deo Safed stood, in the eye of the storm, rocks and trees and water hurtling over him. “I’ll find her! Even if she is dead, a corpse at the bottom of this accursed bottomless lake, I will find her!”

The water did not stop. It was the first great Flood of Kaghan.

The flood of Kaghan
The flood of Kaghan

Meanwhile, in the little cemetery on the outskirts of Naran town, Prince Saif and Badr Jamal had just fallen asleep under the shelter of a beautiful old deodar tree, when a tremendous thundering reached their ears, mingled with a hideous, inhuman wailing.

“He’s here!” Badr Jamal gasped, jolting out of her slumber. Her face was blanched.

For ten long years, the full bloom of her youth and beauty, Badr Jamal had been a slave, a prisoner of this monster, Deo Safed. For ten long years, she had not known family, or friendship, or love – only fear, and whispers, and unspoken dreams, the charade of loving a creature whom she reviled from the depths of her heart. He had tried to win her love, the ogre, using all manner of stratagems – fine clothes and jewelry, delicious, exotic foods, marvelous animals of all colors and shapes and sizes, a host of young fairies to attend upon her every wish.

But Badr Jamal was not free. And there was no pleasure in anything, not priceless jewels or the choicest morsel of food, if she was not free.

Now, this moment, was the closest chance she had had of escape, a real escape. And yet, anything could happen. She held close to Saif. They then saw, in the distance, coming from the direction of Malika Parbat above, the Flood.

It was rushing towards them with lightening speed, tearing out trees, submerging sleeping villages, annihilating every thing and creature that lay in its wake. In a matter of seconds, it would reach the cemetery. And that would be the end.

Saif looked at Badr Jamal, and said, shouting over the deafening roar, “This is it, my love. Tonight, we die, or we live. All we can do now is pray. So pray with me!”

Badr nodded, her face resolute, surrendering finally to whatever Fate had in store. And standing there beneath the sacred cedar, in the shadowy graveyard, on that clear, starlit night, they clasped hands, shut their eyes, and prayed.

Cedrus deodara, or the Deodar Cedar. Native to the Western Himalayas, the tree is considered sacred in the Indian subcontinent, and is the national tree of Pakistan.
Cedrus deodara, or the Deodar Cedar. Native to the Western Himalayas, the tree is considered sacred in the Indian subcontinent, and is the national tree of Pakistan.

“So this is what death feels like,” thought Saif. “Not as painful as I’d imagined, at least.”Saif prayed to God, and Badr to her gods, each with equal soul and passion. The roar of the flood was getting closer, and closer, until suddenly it seemed like it was over their heads, then below them, then all around.

But he wasn’t dead. He could still feel Badr’s warm hand clasped tightly around his. He opened his eyes.

Saif and Badr were standing in a cave, dry as leaves. At Saif’s feet lay the Suleimani cap, which he thought he had forgotten at the Lake and despaired of ever finding. “How?….” Saif’s voice trailed off as he stared at Badr, then at the cap, then around him at the cave. “Where are we?” Badr looked around in amazement. “How did we get here?” The cave was wide and airy, with a deceptively low mouth, so that they had to crawl to get out. Once outside, they saw that  they were on a mountain high above the cemetery, which was by now completely inundated. Tombstones, rocks and fallen trees floated around in grim silence. The Flood had passed. They were alive. They were safe. God, and the gods, had listened.

But what about Deo Safed? Where was he, the great White Ogre whose fury had precipitated a Flood?

He wasn’t at the Lake anymore. He wasn’t even in Kaghan Valley. No, he was well on his way to his final resting place – to Deosai, Land of the Giants, in Baltistan, where all giants were born, and where each one of them went to die.

For Deo Safed had lost the will to live. Badr Jamal hadn’t drowned in the Lake. She had run away. Run away, from him. All these years, he had believed, he had convinced himself that she loved him. That she returned, to some degree, his ardent adoration for her. The truth was, he couldn’t live without her; nor could he live with the knowledge that she had betrayed him. He had lost.  He was defeated, broken.

In Deosai there was peace. There, at the confluence of two of the greatest mountain ranges in the world, the Himalayas and the Karakoram, in the vast, unending plains of his birth, he went, and lay down, and died. His  massive body crumbled, killed by unhappiness, till there was nothing left but a mound of earth, and slowly, nothing at all. He wept the whole way there, and his large, heavy teardrops trickled down the slopes in sad streams, accumulating at a meadow in Kaghan Valley to form Ansoo Lake – “Tear Drop Lake” – a lasting memorial to his undying love for Badr Jamal.

Ansoo Lake, Kaghan Valley
Ansoo Lake, Kaghan Valley

Back in Naran, Prince Saif and Badr Jamal were in ecstasies. They couldn’t believe that the struggle was over, that they had survived, that Saif’s quest was complete, that Badr was free, that they were together. Taking the beautiful fairy’s hand, Saif looked into her luminous, moonlike face, and smiled, “Let’s go home, my Queen”.

He summoned his trusty friend, the jinn of the Suleimani cap, and in the twinkling of an eye, the couple was 2, 500 miles away, at the gates of Prince Saif’s palace in Egypt.

The news of the Prince’s return after almost seven years, and that too, with a bride, was the cause of much celebration throughout the kingdom. The King and Queen, Prince Saif’s parents, were beside themselves with joy, and wedding preparations were underway immediately. Soon, the couple was married, in a spectacular, sumptuous ceremony, and the feasting and festivities lasted for many days.

One could end the story here, with “And then they lived happily ever after”… but that didn’t happen. Not just yet!

Read Part V of the story here

22 thoughts on “The Legend of Saif-ul-Malook Part IV

    Ammara javaid said:
    April 21, 2016 at 12:29 pm

    This is tooo much intresting story….. unblieveable!!!

    manalkhan responded:
    April 18, 2016 at 6:57 pm

    Guys, I’m so so sorry for the delay. A lot of things came up for me and I was unable to write anything at all for a while. Please forgive me for keeping you waiting so long! Here’s the final part of the story: https://windsweptwords.com/2016/04/18/the-legend-of-saif-ul-malook-part-vii/

    Muazzam said:
    April 5, 2016 at 10:32 am

    upload it soon man last u commented in 2014 and now its 2016 and there is no sign of the next part.. and u were saying that u will upload after some editing..???

    princessofbahaar said:
    February 5, 2014 at 9:00 pm

    I have read it thanks my dear.
    You have narrated the story beautifully.
    My dear do you know what happened after Badri Jamal left Saif? Did she marry someone from fairyland I hope Saif did not marry that mean and nasty saffiya!!!

      manalkhan responded:
      February 11, 2014 at 4:25 pm

      Thanks Iqra! There is actually one part left to the story :) Saif doesn’t marry Saffiya, but goes to look for Badr….I will put up the last part soon!

        princessofbahaar said:
        February 24, 2014 at 10:22 pm

        Waiting :)

    manalkhan responded:
    January 14, 2014 at 11:27 pm

    part V is up! do read, and leave your comments!

    Iqra Mohammed said:
    November 12, 2013 at 4:11 pm

    Waiting impatiently :)

    manalkhan responded:
    November 10, 2013 at 1:00 pm

    the next part is coming soon, dear readers! it is really fascinating. thanks for your patience!

    ranjha said:
    November 7, 2013 at 5:08 pm

    when the next part coming up ><

    rimsha16 said:
    August 25, 2013 at 9:03 pm

    Plz put the next part up. This is just an amazing story. I believe in fairies do u. And plz put the next part up

    Iqra Mohammed said:
    July 23, 2013 at 7:17 pm

    Very beautifully explained.
    I always wanted to read the story of Saif-Ul-Malook written by the great saint Mian Mohammed Baksh but I cannot read urdu because I am from UK and Hazrat Mian Mohammed Baksh wrote the story of Saif-ul-malook in Punjabi so I can never read the story, I always prayed to ALLAH ALMIGHTY that someone writes this story in urdu so my mum can read it for me but ALLAH ALMIGHTY has been very kind to me HE put in your mind to write this story in english so I can read it myself.
    May ALLAH Bless you always(ameen)

    The only thing I did not understand was this line:
    One could end the story here, with “And then they lived happily ever after”… but that didn’t happen. Not just yet!

    I mean what happened?

    Rafay Khalid said:
    July 17, 2013 at 12:57 am

    Written extremely well .. really enjoyed your work!
    Two thumbs up!!

    by the way, that picture is not of Ansoo lake.. that’s Shounter Lake in Shounter Valley, AJK, Pakistan.

    Badar Munir said:
    July 8, 2013 at 3:32 am

    Best version so far, however its still a fairytale that does change the fact that the beauty of lake saif ul malook is consumed by greedy localites and the rest is ruined by careless visitors.

    Aamir Bukhari said:
    July 6, 2013 at 1:11 am

    where is the rest? That is not fare. please do write the rest otherwise i have to go there and check the rest of it

    Non-Flapdoodle-ental said:
    May 7, 2013 at 3:45 am

    So glad to have you back! Keep writing. Gee, you’re one of my favorites for a long time now.

    Zuhaib said:
    April 28, 2013 at 3:48 am

    Finally something after 6 months….Really Missed your writing. Hope everything is going fine and you adjust well here since coming back. Loads of prayers for you..stay blessed keep writing..
    Stories coming through you are always like fresh air.. :-)

      manalkhan responded:
      April 28, 2013 at 12:23 pm

      thanks, zuhaib! everything is fine, just had a lot going on family-wise, you know how it is. i know this is very, very belated, but glad you enjoyed it anyway!

    ahmadsarah said:
    April 27, 2013 at 11:42 pm

    I love it Manal. Can’t wait for the rest.

    Sent from my iPhone

    Muhammad Shahbaz Asif said:
    April 27, 2013 at 11:22 pm

    Thanks alot Manal for having some compassion for the nerves of your fans and readers. Keep writing plzzzzzzz.Stay blessed :)

      manalkhan responded:
      April 28, 2013 at 12:22 pm

      haha, thanks for your patience!!!

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